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Morrigoon
01-12-2005, 11:50 PM
Expect orange burst
Crest Whitening Expressions
Childrens Tylenol???

Funky vanilla
Flavor far sweeter than the
One which went before

blueerica
01-13-2005, 12:10 AM
Driving down the street
Blowing past all the slow cars
Almost home again

libraryvixen
01-13-2005, 12:56 AM
Library books stack
Neverending sorrowful
Child knocks them down....ugh

blueerica
01-13-2005, 07:35 AM
my pillow was soft
the waking world is harsh, but
must go to work now

Cadaverous Pallor
01-13-2005, 11:45 AM
Obsession is clear
Now I really care, so I'm
Required to post.

blueerica
01-13-2005, 02:01 PM
The posting, delightful!
The work, quite frightful! My boss
looks over shoulder.

Tref
01-13-2005, 02:08 PM
Expect orange burst
Crest Whitening Expressions
Childrens Tylenol???

Funky vanilla
Flavor far sweeter than the
One which went before

Sing an ode to my teeth
(To the ones that stayed-on)
Sing an ode thine mouth
My sweet periodontal or-gon

I'll brush, brush, brush ye
With toothpaste’s fair ember
And daily I’ll floss ye
At least, when I remember …

Yet, thine dentist,
She
Lashed a tongue at me

"Your problems lie
As thy dreams fly South
When carelessly
You sleep
With cookies in your mouth."


(with apologies to v.c.)

SacTown Chronic
01-13-2005, 03:04 PM
Testicle exam
No lumps to be found today
Check again next month

Flubber
01-13-2005, 05:01 PM
Gosh I love a good haiku thread!

On my way to work
Wayne Brady has such white teeth
That billboard must go

Eliza Hodgkins 1812
01-13-2005, 05:04 PM
The anise toothpaste,
of my dear uncle Tom, leaves
my mouth feeling numb.

tracilicious
01-13-2005, 05:38 PM
I must have thirty
to give out beaucoup mojo
haikuing I go

tracilicious
01-13-2005, 05:39 PM
My kitchen is clean!
dishes live in the washer
banana bread made

tracilicious
01-13-2005, 05:40 PM
Jesus died for Tref
Tref tell funny story about books
you should check it out

tracilicious
01-13-2005, 05:42 PM
Don't call me wanker
reminds me of a hot dog
kosher beef only

tracilicious
01-13-2005, 05:42 PM
ball bounces on my door
dog tail hits my arse ouch ouch
guess that's what I get

tracilicious
01-13-2005, 05:43 PM
Thirty posts I have
now I will stop torturing
mojo I bestow

blueerica
01-13-2005, 06:19 PM
Testicle exam
No lumps to be found today
Check again next month

Self exam I ask
Of SacTown Chronic today.
But will he answer?