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Gemini Cricket
03-15-2006, 11:09 AM
I
by GC

I can be leaned on
often I won't
bend.

I can be counted on
I'm as loyal as a
friend.

I can make you laugh
sometimes I am a
clown.

I can pick you up
but my eyes can throw you
down.

I can make you think
I've lived my share of
life.

I can make you cry
my tongue can be a
knife.

I can make you mad
if there's a flame to
stoke.

I can take your love
and fix it when it's
broke.

I can give it to you in return
upon special
request.

But I can make you weary
like an ever present
guest.

And on that right occasion
I'm one to make you
moan.

But I'm not your self-esteem
you got to build that
on
your
own.

Capt Jack
03-15-2006, 02:53 PM
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You must spread some Mojo around before giving it to Gemini Cricket again.



dammit. :snap: :snap: none the less.

Motorboat Cruiser
03-15-2006, 04:17 PM
I really enjoyed that, GC. :)

Ghoulish Delight
03-15-2006, 04:25 PM
Solid.

Snowflake
03-15-2006, 06:13 PM
Wonderful, GC!
:cool:

CoasterMatt
03-15-2006, 07:02 PM
I like it, I like it!

sleepyjeff
03-15-2006, 08:47 PM
:snap: ....That was great:)

Tramspotter
03-16-2006, 09:49 AM
Second :coffee: of the day... :snap: :snap: dig it.

Brother to the night says: "Don't give up da fight!"

DisneyDaniel
03-16-2006, 10:25 AM
I really enjoyed reading "I" and love that "I" is also about "you." :cool:

Gemini Cricket
03-16-2006, 11:33 AM
Thank you for the kind comments, y'all! :)

This one was about an argument I witnessed my friends having. He came to the conclusion, at the end of their argument, that he could be everything to her but no matter what, she was responsible for the way she felt about herself. He said something like, 'I'm your husband, not your savior.' That stuck with me.
:)

Capt Jack
03-16-2006, 11:38 AM
'I'm your husband, not your savior.' That stuck with me.
:)


oh wow.........kinda stuck with me too. :cool:

wise words

innerSpaceman
03-17-2006, 04:55 PM
You are my personal conscience and savior, Gemini Cricket.



Loved that bit of poetry.