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€uroMeinke
02-02-2005, 04:50 PM
Alive again
Not that I was dead
But rather stupefied
Like a zombie

Moving like the undea
Pleasureless
Indiscriminant
Without love or reason

I awoke today
With purpose once again
Things to do
Deadlines to catch

So much it’s overwhelming
And I wonder
Do I really want
This resurrection?

So reluctantly I rise
Beg forgiveness
For my forgetfulness
And return to my life

Already in progress

Eliza Hodgkins 1812
02-02-2005, 05:33 PM
"Return to my life


Already in progress."


I really like those ideas strung together so.

FEJ
02-02-2005, 08:24 PM
:snap::fej: :snap:

Gemini Cricket
02-02-2005, 08:51 PM
Yay! :) I'll agree with EH1812, the last two sentences are great.
:)

lindyhop
02-02-2005, 09:00 PM
Very nice.
:snap:

wendybeth
02-02-2005, 09:21 PM
Very cool, €uro! (Although I think the dying virus within you might beg to differ). Glad you're back with us, although I will miss your fever/cold med ramblings- er, ruminations....

Now stay healthy, dammit!

blueerica
02-03-2005, 07:16 AM
Very retro/TV vibe to it, swimming with multiple meanings. BTW -- When was the last time you heard "And now we return to __________, already in progress..." ??? We still get "News breaks" etc.. But I don't remember the last time I heard that.. Hmmm..

Now I'll hear it 3 times daily! (I always feel like I'm signing up for something big when I give grandiose statements that allude to never and always... :rolleyes: )

Cadaverous Pallor
02-03-2005, 11:15 AM
:snap:

Betty
02-03-2005, 02:23 PM
:)