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Cadaverous Pallor
09-06-2006, 07:48 PM
"You're all morons" he snarled
and I laughed out loud
this couldn't be real

He actually doesn't see
how foolish he looks
and is

Later, after, mumbled:
"You guys think I'm a moron."
I felt like laughing again
but stifled it in the face of his
obvious misery

Whenever I feel helpless
I think of my Dad
At the whim of forces
I've already IDed in myself
and have at least
attempted to slay

sleepyjeff
09-06-2006, 08:22 PM
That was really good:snap: :snap: :snap:

DreadPirateRoberts
09-06-2006, 08:59 PM
cool

CoasterMatt
09-06-2006, 09:05 PM
very cool :snap:

Motorboat Cruiser
09-06-2006, 09:39 PM
Really nice, CP! :)

LSPoorEeyorick
09-07-2006, 07:25 AM
Excellent. And I think the "ID and slay" of the following generation is really universal.

Cadaverous Pallor
09-07-2006, 08:17 AM
Excellent. And I think the "ID and slay" of the following generation is really universal.I'm glad you caught that! My original version included a final stanza saying something like "I wonder what my kids will figure out before I do." I thought it was a bit much, and that the point was illustrated already - and apparently I was right. :D

tracilicious
09-07-2006, 08:42 AM
:snap: I like it!