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Cadaverous Pallor
11-26-2007, 10:32 PM
<jarring image>
<appeal to sentimentality>
<minute geographical info>
<aching conflict>
<eternal question>
<brisque response>
<imaginative twist>
<defiant claim>
<personal revelation>

<possible moral>

Gemini Cricket
11-26-2007, 10:40 PM
<cool>

:snap:

Snowflake
11-26-2007, 10:51 PM
<me likey>

€uroMeinke
11-26-2007, 10:53 PM
<mojo>

mousepod
11-26-2007, 11:02 PM
love it. reminds me a little of this scene from Steven Soderbergh's Schizopolis:
- Generic greeting.

- Generic greeting. Obligatory question about the evening's activities.

- Oh, qualified, vaguely positive reply.

- Uninspired description of movie and subsequent conversation with girlfriend.

- Ooh, really well-rehearsed speech about workload and stress.

- Genuine sorrow.

- Um, truthful-sounding promises of future satisfaction?

- Enticement to agree?

- Accepted.

- Gratitude.

Not Afraid
11-26-2007, 11:19 PM
<snap>

LSPoorEeyorick
11-27-2007, 08:21 AM
<appreciation>

Cadaverous Pallor
11-27-2007, 08:34 AM
<thanks for approval>

<self-conscious caveat>

<rebound from self-conscious caveat>

Strangler Lewis
11-27-2007, 10:01 AM
<uncritical approval>

Bornieo: Fully Loaded
11-27-2007, 02:07 PM
<thoughts> :snap:

NirvanaMan
11-27-2007, 02:22 PM
<taco>

Eliza Hodgkins 1812
11-27-2007, 05:25 PM
I liked this very much.