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Cadaverous Pallor
11-26-2007, 10:32 PM
<jarring image>
<appeal to sentimentality>
<minute geographical info>
<aching conflict>
<eternal question>
<brisque response>
<imaginative twist>
<defiant claim>
<personal revelation>
<possible moral>
Gemini Cricket
11-26-2007, 10:40 PM
<cool>
:snap:
Snowflake
11-26-2007, 10:51 PM
<me likey>
€uroMeinke
11-26-2007, 10:53 PM
<mojo>
mousepod
11-26-2007, 11:02 PM
love it. reminds me a little of this scene from Steven Soderbergh's Schizopolis:
- Generic greeting.
- Generic greeting. Obligatory question about the evening's activities.
- Oh, qualified, vaguely positive reply.
- Uninspired description of movie and subsequent conversation with girlfriend.
- Ooh, really well-rehearsed speech about workload and stress.
- Genuine sorrow.
- Um, truthful-sounding promises of future satisfaction?
- Enticement to agree?
- Accepted.
- Gratitude.
Not Afraid
11-26-2007, 11:19 PM
<snap>
LSPoorEeyorick
11-27-2007, 08:21 AM
<appreciation>
Cadaverous Pallor
11-27-2007, 08:34 AM
<thanks for approval>
<self-conscious caveat>
<rebound from self-conscious caveat>
Strangler Lewis
11-27-2007, 10:01 AM
<uncritical approval>
Bornieo: Fully Loaded
11-27-2007, 02:07 PM
<thoughts> :snap:
NirvanaMan
11-27-2007, 02:22 PM
<taco>
Eliza Hodgkins 1812
11-27-2007, 05:25 PM
I liked this very much.
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