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Deebs 01-05-2008 03:53 PM

I love both versions of Take 5. I thought I was going to prefer it without the VO, my fear being that it would disturb the tranquil vibe you had going. I don't think it does though. CP, you did a fabulous job on the VO! The words blend in seamlessly and are not jarring at all.

And after looking at some of the other submissions? Psh! I am even more awed by your talents, T.

Nephythys 01-05-2008 03:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Disneyphile (Post 183427)
I'm going to title it "Drop the Ordinary" and it will be in the video gallery under "most recent". I'm also supposed to get a direct link after the entry is approved, at which time I'll post it.

Perfect!

Disneyphile 01-05-2008 03:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Deebs (Post 183429)
And after looking at some of the other submissions? Psh! I am even more awed by your talents, T.

Thanks. :blush:

Morrigoon 01-05-2008 04:43 PM

I would just like to point out that in addition to the awesome filmmaking abilities of Disneyphile, another person deserves compliments here: CP, your performance is really great!

As much as I like CP's voiceover in 5+, It's a bit jarring to suddenly have a voice. Had there been a VO at the opening too, say, before the shower sound kicks in, or while Jen is rolling her eyes and before the soap drop, then it might have worked better for me, but with the rest of the ad being so quiet, I think it's better w/out the VO.

Gemini Cricket 01-05-2008 04:44 PM

Hmm.
I like the VO version of 5.
:)

wolfy999 01-05-2008 04:45 PM

Take 5 VO has my vote.

Disneyphile 01-05-2008 05:17 PM

Y'all are more indecisive than me. :p

Heh.

I'll wait until a few more chime in at least. :)

figment1986 01-05-2008 05:19 PM

hmm... the voice over sounds nice... but seems to make the video unbalanced with the no voice until then... but I'm just a student of RTV and never did get good grades on my commercials.

The VO is nice... Its your entry, up to you.

Gemini Cricket 01-05-2008 05:20 PM

Are Jenn and Greg going to be in the sequel?

~MS~ 01-05-2008 05:21 PM

Take 5 with the VO is my vote, Jenny did an amazing job of making sure if someone had looked away they'd snap back to see the tv at that point.


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