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Morrigoon 01-03-2008 10:40 AM

DAMN! I like it!

I agree that you could afford to cut a few frames from the applying-Dove-to-loofah shot - there's that little pause before it starts to come out that makes it a tad long, but not horribly so. Personally, I think the music is great. And I agree with the love of the mirror shot.

Alex 01-03-2008 11:11 AM

Well, if there's anything I'm likely to be wrong about it is music. So definitely don't my opinion any particular weight in that regard.

alphabassettgrrl 01-03-2008 11:27 AM

Doesn't play. ::sniffle:: Not sure what I'm doing wrong. pout.

wolfy999 01-03-2008 12:08 PM

I had to update my Quicktime to play....

Not Afraid 01-03-2008 12:10 PM

It's hard to be objective. Good friend shooting, good friend starting, good friend composting, my newly re-done bathroom (and even my photography is featured).........But here goes anyways. The uncomfortable moment is waiting for the soap to come out of the bottle. It just takes a bit too long. I agree that you don't know what Jen is "looking at" in the end shot. ("Man, I need to shave my pubes" comes to mind. ;)). I love the pacing of the music, it works perfectly. I think that it could be a bit "prettier" to fit the product.

I love the concept of the reflection shot!!!! Love Jen's expression of disgust and I love the soap dropping.

So, there's my very un-objective $.02.

Kevy Baby 01-03-2008 12:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Not Afraid (Post 182708)
...and I love the soap dropping.

Kudos to Frodo Potter for his excellent soap dropping skills; a talent I understand he studied in depth with iSm.

Cadaverous Pallor 01-03-2008 12:46 PM

And yes, that really is NA's soap that I can't stand the sight of. ;)

Not Afraid 01-03-2008 12:49 PM

A brand of soap that I heavily favor over any Dove body wash, BTW.

Cadaverous Pallor 01-03-2008 12:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Not Afraid (Post 182725)
A brand of soap that I heavily favor over any Dove body wash, BTW.

Sorry about the soap dents! I must've dropped it at least a dozen times, plus whatever damage Mr Potter inflicted.

Not Afraid 01-03-2008 12:57 PM

It's fine. It still works. ;)


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