Peachy edits, C. Try these ones--

Did you see in old Sherwood
a noble-robbing Robin Hood
bequeath the gold unto the good?

Visit Stratford-on-Avon
to see a clever knave upon
the stage, his shining dagger drawn?

I have TWO more songs I am going to post example verses for- if you guys can do this a bit more for me I would be delighted. I am already beside myself with sheer glee-

You have no idea how happy you guys have made me today!

Got to ask for no more at this time. You guys have given me sooooo many wonderful verses and ideas!!! It is going to be a sheer joy to present these to the other members of my group.

Thanks and much mojo love to you!!!