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lashbear 11-05-2010 10:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Kevy Baby (Post 336806)
those optical illusions where you can see more than thing (like below - one image mildly NSFW).

Spoiler:

Very Illuminating. :p

wendybeth 11-06-2010 12:22 AM

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Originally Posted by Cadaverous Pallor (Post 336821)
I swear, the first thing I thought was "runny nose". It reminds me of those commercials for nasal decongestants or whatever where they show an animation of a see-through profile, demonstrating the product at work.

I have chronic sinusitis, and that's the first thing I thought- rhinitis.

Bornieo: Fully Loaded 11-06-2010 01:34 AM

I like the drip/bulb idea - not a fan of the colors or the font, imho. Alot of dead space.

Kevy Baby 11-06-2010 06:22 AM

Whereas I love the colors and open space.

I like the design!

Cadaverous Pallor 11-06-2010 01:16 PM

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Originally Posted by LSPoorEeyorick (Post 336831)
Thanks for the helpful feedback.

How about... this? (The black area won't be as thick - that's bleed area.)


This, I dig. Love the lightbulb and three dimensional tap. The title helps a lot, too. There is a bit of dead space - I'd try extending the area horizontally and enlarge the lettering.

LSPoorEeyorick 11-06-2010 04:47 PM

I'd extend the area if it wasn't the front side of a business card. ;)

But I'm glad to hear that the concept is coming across clearer in this version. It's hard to get something like that across! I really appreciate all of your feedback; it helped me arrive here.

Kudos to Tom for brainstorming with me, and tossing out the light bulb idea. I want to live in his Clever-Cleverland.

I understand about the open space - though I do like the fact that it's not crammed. I don't see it as "dead" so much as purposefully open.

My personal information will be on the back, as is the recent standard for Creative (capital C, meaning "hire me for my creativity") calling cards.

Bornieo: Fully Loaded 11-06-2010 07:43 PM

Have you considered merging the W's? Like the W in Powers with W in WaterWorks in a cross or + like pattern? ImHo. I think the deadspace would be lesser if the eyeline of the figure was even with the lettering. ImHo

Not Afraid 11-07-2010 12:42 AM

Since I'm late to the game, the first picture/thought was "She's a drip". But, does anyone call a person a drip anymore?

I get the picture now. The look of it reminds me of a Victorian silhouette which is not an era I usually associate with you. But, I like the look of it.


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