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lashbear 11-30-2009 01:13 AM

Paging All Youse Grammar Police - HELP!
 
Hi all !

Here is a sentence from an Agatha Christie novel [referring to the properties of Curare]:

"It is a very swift and rapid poison"

What is the grammatical term for using two adjectives with identical meaning in the same sentence? Stoat and I can't think of the term, and it's driving us insane.

Morrigoon 11-30-2009 05:09 AM

So I googled it, and the answer is "tautology".

lashbear 11-30-2009 05:36 AM

Bum, why couldn't we find that ?

thank you so much - you're been beneficially helpfully of use to us !! :D

Cadaverous Pallor 11-30-2009 08:44 AM

I'm trying to think of some minute sliver of distinction between the words "swift" and "rapid".

Moonliner 11-30-2009 09:04 AM

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Originally Posted by Cadaverous Pallor (Post 307627)
I'm trying to think of some minute sliver of distinction between the words "swift" and "rapid".

I suppose a poison could be swift to be absorbed into the blood stream but slow to act on the system... So in this case it would be swift to be absorbed and quick to act.

Kevy Baby 11-30-2009 09:06 AM

Another word that comes to mind is "redundant"

Ghoulish Delight 11-30-2009 09:37 AM

Redundant and repetitive.

SzczerbiakManiac 11-30-2009 10:31 AM

I have another grammar question. One of our more annoying directors sent out a banal Thanksgiving e-mail last week which included this sentence:

"Perhaps all of us can get passed the big dinner and look forward for the opportunities ahead to be grateful."

Am I correct in thinking he should have used "past" instead of "passed"? Or is that a perfectly cromulent sentence?

Ghoulish Delight 11-30-2009 10:34 AM

Past.

Ghoulish Delight 11-30-2009 10:34 AM

Unless he was hoping someone would pass the entire dinner to him from the other end of the table.

SzczerbiakManiac 11-30-2009 10:36 AM

Thank you for the confirmation.

SacTown Chronic 11-30-2009 10:37 AM

Which would be an opportunity to be grateful, in my book.

Alex 11-30-2009 10:38 AM

Yes, it should have been past.

Gemini Cricket 11-30-2009 10:42 AM

This thread embiggens my grammar doings.

Alex 11-30-2009 10:47 AM

And if you want some information on how you'd know:

"Passed" is always a verb ("I passed the car" "he passed away").

Past can be a noun ("I knew him in the past") and adverb ("he drove past me"), and adjective ("the past events were a success") or as a preposition ("the high school is down the road just past the convenience store"). But not a verb.

In your sentence, "passed" is used as a preposition. Which means it should be "past."

SacTown Chronic 11-30-2009 10:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gemini Cricket
This thread embiggens my grammar doings.


DeSean Jackson of the Eagles said that it's "unpossible" to cover him with one defensive back.


Quote:

"Perhaps all of us can get passed the big dinner and look forward for the opportunities ahead to be grateful."
Maybe it's a fortune cookie calling for a happy and safe post-Thanksgiving, uh, movement.

JWBear 11-30-2009 11:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SzczerbiakManiac (Post 307648)
I have another grammar question. One of our more annoying directors sent out a banal Thanksgiving e-mail last week which included this sentence:

"Perhaps all of us can get passed the big dinner and look forward for the opportunities ahead to be grateful."

Am I correct in thinking he should have used "past" instead of "passed"? Or is that a perfectly cromulent sentence?

Passed/past isn't the only grammar error in his sentence.

I would have said "Perhaps we can all get past the big dinner, and look forward to the opportunities for being grateful that lie ahead.

Alex 11-30-2009 12:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cadaverous Pallor (Post 307627)
I'm trying to think of some minute sliver of distinction between the words "swift" and "rapid".

"small bird" vs. "rough patch of river"

Perhaps it is a poison that both kills birds and dissolves rocks.

Ghoulish Delight 11-30-2009 12:11 PM

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Originally Posted by JWBear (Post 307670)
Passed/past isn't the only grammar error in his sentence.

I would have said "Perhaps we can all get past the big dinner, and look forward to the opportunities for being grateful that lie ahead.

The comma is unnecessary.

alphabassettgrrl 11-30-2009 09:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SacTown Chronic (Post 307662)
DeSean Jackson of the Eagles said that it's "unpossible" to cover him with one defensive back.

::shudder::

Quote:

Originally Posted by JWBear (Post 307670)
I would have said "Perhaps we can all get past the big dinner, and look forward to the opportunities for being grateful that lie ahead.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ghoulish Delight (Post 307681)
The comma is unnecessary.

Unnecessary, but not out of line.

I love grammar!

Kevy Baby 07-24-2011 02:09 PM

1 Attachment(s)
Here's one I thought some might appreciate.

Ghoulish Delight 07-24-2011 02:14 PM

Err, you did something wrong with your attachment. Tried to fix it, but didn't work.

Kevy Baby 07-24-2011 02:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ghoulish Delight (Post 349962)
Err, you did something wrong with your attachment. Tried to fix it, but didn't work.

I fixed it. I tried something new, and it showed in preview and after the post as okay; not sure what happened.

Weird

Ghoulish Delight 07-24-2011 03:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Kevy Baby (Post 349963)
I fixed it. I tried something new, and it showed in preview and after the post as okay; not sure what happened.

Weird

It showed for you because the image was in your cache.

The way you to do what you were trying to do is to upload the file, then come back to the editing box and click the drop down arrow next to the paperclip icon. Click on the image name and it will insert the correct tag for you.

Morrigoon 07-24-2011 03:41 PM

That made me totally LOL. I may have to repost that sentiment at some point...

lashbear 01-06-2013 05:15 PM

Sorry to resurrect an old thread but.
 
Had to share - and this is a better forum that FB just because.


flippyshark 01-06-2013 10:40 PM

Number 14 should read "Fvck profanity!"

Cadaverous Pallor 01-10-2013 11:14 AM

I love number 15, and number 20 because I LOVE the passive voice and have always been graded down because of it. Fvck you, English teacher!!

SzczerbiakManiac 01-10-2013 04:40 PM

I use passive voice when I want to avoid using "they" as a singular non-gender-specific pronoun.


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