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Cadaverous Pallor 02-02-2007 03:03 PM

The muffin
 
Ate a muffin today
ate a muffin I baked
baked from scratch, yes I did
oats and bananas

BFD, you say
happens every day
but not to me it doesn't
hell I never eat muffins

want to hold on to that moment
when I did something myself
have to remember the feeling
the pride, the regret

cause the slack sets in
and the cash flows out
to keep time bundled up
blown on the couch

I am done with the cave
with it's sloth and it's warmth
want the spring to come early
O2 crisp in my lungs

the bike is ready to ride
brown bag lunch, change of clothes
banished the dust
and opened windows

gimme. that. SUN!
feel my cells divide
won't go back where I was
too far in this stride

spend 5 bucks on a snack?
have the cash, and I could
but the secret is this
this muffin, it's good.

Capt Jack 02-02-2007 03:05 PM

:snap: grooovy

Snowflake 02-02-2007 03:07 PM

Almost as yummy as your muffin.


:cheers:

Ghoulish Delight 02-02-2007 03:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Snowflake (Post 118360)
Almost as yummy as your muffin.


:cheers:

Not a day goes by that I don't tell her the same thing.

Snowflake 02-02-2007 03:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ghoulish Delight (Post 118361)
Not a day goes by that I don't tell her the same thing.

Doh! Jeez.......:eek: that's not what I meant, sh!t.

Gn2Dlnd 02-02-2007 03:45 PM

Oh great. Now the straights are at it again.

Muffinmojo. :snap:

Not Afraid 02-02-2007 03:46 PM

LOL! Donna, you walked right into that one.

Snowflake 02-02-2007 03:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Not Afraid (Post 118366)
LOL! Donna, you walked right into that one.

Ran headlong into it is more like it.

mousepod 02-02-2007 04:04 PM

...or even dove.

Cadaverous Pallor 02-02-2007 05:14 PM

And here I thought there were 8 replies to my poem. :p

Capt Jack 02-02-2007 05:19 PM

of course they were, AFAIK theres only one here thats 'sampled your muffins'

Ghoulish Delight 02-02-2007 05:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Capt Jack (Post 118402)
of course they were, AFAIK theres only one here thats 'sampled your muffins'

It was full of bananas.

Capt Jack 02-02-2007 05:23 PM

as it should be

*high fives GD*

Babette 02-02-2007 07:31 PM

mmmm...muffins...the breakfast cupcake! :babette:

I'd say I wanna try your muffin, but you might take it the wrong way ;)

Great poem, CP, great poem!

Gemini Cricket 02-02-2007 07:50 PM

snapage
:snap:

I like it.
I like muffins.
:)

NirvanaMan 02-02-2007 07:54 PM

Heh, muffins.

CoasterMatt 02-02-2007 10:47 PM

As the proprieter and head chef of the Nuclear Muffin Test Kitchen, I must say that was rockin'! :snap:

DreadPirateRoberts 02-03-2007 06:37 AM

Now I'm thinking of Martha Quinn, and Mojo Nixon

Motorboat Cruiser 02-03-2007 11:56 AM

That was very cool, CP! :)


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