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FEJ 05-10-2005 11:38 AM

Volunteer
 
Self-inflicted misery
served open face for all to see
it wasn't me that volunteered to be a victim for free
so don't pass the blame to me.


this is a work in progress. I didn't want the verse to get lost in my head.

Eliza Hodgkins 1812 05-10-2005 11:40 AM

Poem or song? It sounds like it could be either, which is meant as a compliment. I especially like "served open face for all to see".

Ghoulish Delight 05-10-2005 11:42 AM

(Hey, we can't hear you. Try stepping up to the Open Mic with these). ;)

I like the pieces, though.

FEJ 05-10-2005 12:24 PM

my bad....was trying to post between stops...should be in correct forum now...thanks N/A


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