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BigDaddyKyle 10-26-2005 09:11 PM

A poem by BDK
 
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I have no words to say
I'm at a loss for words
for what you did today
has changed my whole life

It may be for the good
It may be for the bad
But all I know for sure
Is I'm with you tonight

Can you hold me close
Can you warm my soul
Can you love me for who I am

For I need to be loved
Like no other man
Like no one has been loved before

I need to be loved
And love back indeed
I have a love to love
Right now I make this decree

I will love who needs to be loved
and I will be loved by all indeed

Just because I'm me

Tell me what you think. (This is the first poem I have ever written. Just thought I'd give it a try!

Thanks,

BDK

Not Afraid 10-26-2005 09:37 PM

Fantastic! Keep it up, BDK!

Betty 10-27-2005 05:20 AM

:snap:

BigDaddyKyle 10-27-2005 06:42 AM

Thank you! I will work on another today if I feel inspired.

BDK

Motorboat Cruiser 10-27-2005 08:16 AM

Nice job, BDK. :)

€uroMeinke 10-27-2005 08:38 AM

BDK - be sure to check out the "Open Mic" forum for your future contributions

BigDaddyKyle 10-27-2005 08:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by €uroMeinke
BDK - be sure to check out the "Open Mic" forum for your future contributions

Gotcha!


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