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Gemini Cricket 04-28-2006 08:25 AM

fire and music (Rated: R)
 
fire and music *
by: me

You say I should be this
But I don’t give a piss
You’re saying I ain’t smart
Alright I’ll play that part
Now you’re saying don’t be sad
My emotion’s just a fad
‘This man, he must be crazy
Travis Bickle and Scorsese
How come you are so mad?
Come make us giggle, Brad!’

I’m responding with a frown
Cause I ain’t your fu cking clown
You’re talking way too loud
I can pick you in a crowd
What I’m saying at this time
Is your mouth’s an uphill climb
But something you forgot
Is I’m everything you’re not
Don’t give me no more sh!t
That ‘tude has got to quit
You’re reading what I wrote
While I take away your vote
Upon my self-esteem
Your ass I’m gonna ream
If you don’t shut your face
My fist I’m gonna place
Right between those eyes
That’s my compromise
I know you’re not my rival
But kiss kiss that’s survival
That’s your table overturned
And this meeting, it’s adjourned.







* This is NOT directed at anyone specifically.

blueerica 04-28-2006 09:31 AM

Damn you! I read this right after I gave you mojo for something else!

Right on!

Is it something in the water, because I think you've captured my thoughts!!

Gemini Cricket 04-28-2006 10:14 AM

Thank you, Erica!

Do you know how therapeutic it was to write that this morning? I felt so good after.

:)

Gemini Cricket 04-28-2006 10:44 AM

Sometimes I wish I could stay at home and just write. I have so much in this fat head of mine...

Cadaverous Pallor 04-28-2006 04:13 PM

Hot DAMN! Can't mojo you, but you know you rock, no need for me to "vote" :)

wendybeth 04-28-2006 07:59 PM

:cheers:

You rock, GC.

CoasterMatt 04-28-2006 08:09 PM

That was like some sort of soul enema... :snap:

tracilicious 04-30-2006 11:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cadaverous Pallor
Hot DAMN! Can't mojo you, but you know you rock, no need for me to "vote" :)

My sentiments exactly.

Motorboat Cruiser 04-30-2006 11:58 AM

I love it. :)


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