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blueerica 01-27-2005 09:01 PM

Better
 
Sitting quietly
in a crowd of busy people
conversing with one another
I, with myself,
feeling very alone,
am dreaming of something better.
Better is for another day.

Gemini Cricket 01-27-2005 09:08 PM

It somehow goes nicely with your avatar. It must be the dreamy gaze upwards...
:)
Good stuff.
:cool:

blueerica 01-28-2005 07:36 AM

Never thought of it that way, GC...

Nice observation, Thanks. :)

Eliza Hodgkins 1812 01-28-2005 01:49 PM

Ooh, I agree with GC

I really like the "I, with myself" to illustrate that you emphasize the notion that you can be in good company on your own, but still feel lonely. If that makes sense. Uh, yeah.

Simple and sweet, chica.

lindyhop 01-29-2005 10:08 PM

I like.

I've been there.

Thanks.

:snap:


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