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Gemini Cricket 06-09-2006 07:56 AM

Artism
 
The world flipped on its side
and I dropped into a painted
canvas.

I fell to my knees as
butter nut squash colored
my legs.

I clenched my hands and
indigo blue errupted through
my fingers.

Up close this new land
was a torrent of different
hues washing in and out.

A clutter of multi-colored
fish engaged in a frozen
swim.

So much to absorb,
madenning and bold
magnificent and wild.

A streak here and a swipe
there, I walked across
chestnut brown that made a chair.

So complicated and tangled,
expression enveloped in angst
and glee.

With the world untipped,
I found the painting looked just
like me.

tracilicious 06-09-2006 07:58 AM

:snap:

Gemini Cricket 06-09-2006 08:03 AM

Oops, had to make a quick change*. I hope tracilicious finds it snappable still.
:)


*I mean to type 'looked' instead of 'was' at the end.

sleepyjeff 06-10-2006 06:17 PM

Very good!

:snap:

Motorboat Cruiser 06-10-2006 07:06 PM

Love it, GC. That is really cool! :)

Cadaverous Pallor 06-11-2006 01:45 PM

Awesomeness, beautiful!


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