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Morrigoon 08-11-2006 01:04 PM

Done - an expression in prose
 
When the stress of wondering
Exceeds the stress of knowing the worst
The rumble of the drums
Restless natives gather in the square
And you're the only one in a powdered wig
Wondering, waiting, watching
For the blade to fall
When will it be done?

sleepyjeff 08-11-2006 11:07 PM

Very good.

tracilicious 08-11-2006 11:16 PM

I like it very much.

Motorboat Cruiser 08-12-2006 11:15 AM

Nice, Morrigoon. :)

CoasterMatt 08-12-2006 12:06 PM

Wonderful :)


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