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Cadaverous Pallor 09-23-2006 12:57 PM

training poles
 
eating in my car
keeping relish off my lap
listening to African dance rhythms and staring at the trees
saplings no more but still strapped to support sticks
common practice

slender straight stalks explode green out the top
sideshow bob
matched on either side by rigid training poles
ex-trees, shaved cousins
past accomplishment assisting the next generation
teaching the ways of resisting gravity

all well and good yet I can't help but think
what if you learned to stand
while strapped to corpses?

CoasterMatt 09-23-2006 01:35 PM

:snap: :cool: :snap:

tracilicious 09-23-2006 01:55 PM

Awesome. I love that imagery. :snap: :snap: :snap:

Cadaverous Pallor 09-23-2006 02:17 PM

If I ever put together a real book of poetry I'd call it Eating in my car.

Strangler Lewis 09-23-2006 02:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cadaverous Pallor
what if you learned to stand
while strapped to corpses?

Is there any other way to learn?


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