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Cadaverous Pallor 11-26-2007 10:32 PM

<poem>
 
<jarring image>
<appeal to sentimentality>
<minute geographical info>
<aching conflict>
<eternal question>
<brisque response>
<imaginative twist>
<defiant claim>
<personal revelation>

<possible moral>

Gemini Cricket 11-26-2007 10:40 PM

<cool>

:snap:

Snowflake 11-26-2007 10:51 PM

<me likey>

€uroMeinke 11-26-2007 10:53 PM

<mojo>

mousepod 11-26-2007 11:02 PM

love it. reminds me a little of this scene from Steven Soderbergh's Schizopolis:
Quote:

- Generic greeting.

- Generic greeting. Obligatory question about the evening's activities.

- Oh, qualified, vaguely positive reply.

- Uninspired description of movie and subsequent conversation with girlfriend.

- Ooh, really well-rehearsed speech about workload and stress.

- Genuine sorrow.

- Um, truthful-sounding promises of future satisfaction?

- Enticement to agree?

- Accepted.

- Gratitude.

Not Afraid 11-26-2007 11:19 PM

<snap>

LSPoorEeyorick 11-27-2007 08:21 AM

<appreciation>

Cadaverous Pallor 11-27-2007 08:34 AM

<thanks for approval>

<self-conscious caveat>

<rebound from self-conscious caveat>

Strangler Lewis 11-27-2007 10:01 AM

<uncritical approval>

Bornieo: Fully Loaded 11-27-2007 02:07 PM

<thoughts> :snap:


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