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CoasterMatt 06-03-2008 11:09 PM

Babbling Away
 
Misfiring synapses push/pull my thoughts
through my brain like a bullet train
Said something did I out loud?
Lips aren't moving but I'm thinking of sound

The thoughts are really clear,
muddled somewhere between the brain and the larynx
can't seem to properly move the air

Herky jerky no proper sentence structure
cromagnon dude would be proud

There's a baby in a stroller just as happy as me
Baby's just babbling just like me
Something's really right there
Happy thoughts here get stuck on the way

But my smile speaks volumes more than any words anyway
I'm just babbling, babbling, babbling away

:)

wendybeth 06-04-2008 12:33 AM

*Snap*!:snap:

I have several clients who had strokes who sort of described their early attempts to speak as you do here- their brains could form the thought clearly, but somewhere between thought and articulation there was a disconnect. Incredibly frustrating, but at the same time it made them appreciate the way things are supposed to work together in a whole new way. I like the baby/smile part especially.:)

lashbear 06-04-2008 04:52 AM

Very nice !! We're getting a lot of talent in our group now, aren't we ? :snap:

LSPoorEeyorick 06-04-2008 06:42 AM

(LB! We always had it!)

Matt, I always enjoy your writing. Thanks for sharing.

NickO'Time 06-04-2008 09:21 AM

Very cool!:)

BDBopper 06-04-2008 10:52 AM

:snap: :snap: :snap: :snap:

Visible Mojo for you. Great poem


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