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Disneyphile · 12-11-2007, 04:29 PM

Ok, here's the 90-second teaser that I recently cut for the show that I'm helping to pitch:

http://web.mac.com/tdsproductions/iW...s/Sample1.html

Honest feedback is most welcome and appreciated. My feelings will not be hurt - I use feedback to make things better, and there is always room for improvement.

Also, you will see the new animated logo at the very end of the teaser. I had to scrap the original "lens" logo, because it just didn't work well in print and wouldn't center. I like this new one, because it ends on a simple line, demanding attention, after it's initial "spark". To me, it seems a little easier on the eyes than the original concept. Feel free to comment on that too.

So, anyway, please watch, and let me know what you think. (Don't mind the rest of the website - I'm working on it right now.)

12-11-2007, 04:29 PM	#1
Disneyphile SQUIRREL! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: On the curbside. Posts: 5,098	TV Show Teaser Sample Ok, here's the 90-second teaser that I recently cut for the show that I'm helping to pitch: http://web.mac.com/tdsproductions/iW...s/Sample1.html Honest feedback is most welcome and appreciated. My feelings will not be hurt - I use feedback to make things better, and there is always room for improvement. Also, you will see the new animated logo at the very end of the teaser. I had to scrap the original "lens" logo, because it just didn't work well in print and wouldn't center. I like this new one, because it ends on a simple line, demanding attention, after it's initial "spark". To me, it seems a little easier on the eyes than the original concept. Feel free to comment on that too. So, anyway, please watch, and let me know what you think. (Don't mind the rest of the website - I'm working on it right now.)
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