Awesome feedback, Tom (& LSPE too)!
Sadly, that car show is the only footage that we have so far. The original full pitch with voiceovers, variety, et al, was extremely low-res, and I can't even use any of it. (Beside it being copyrighted by the original production company.) But, we have more shoots scheduled soon, and then I'll be making a new full pitch reel for him. Until then, this was made to supplement the original pitch reel, mainly to tie me to the show for an impromptu investor meeting a couple weeks ago.
I see what you mean about the dissolves, and some of the clips do seem to drag more than others. I'm definitely noting that for the full reel. I see what you mean about the text too - it's really hard to read online. On a bigger screen, it's much more clear. But, the angle can throw it off a bit.
Thanks SO much for taking the time to watch and review.
This was my little rush project that I had about 10 hours to digitize and complete all the way to the DVD packaging. At least with the full reel, I'll have a bit more notice, and I can rummage through my feedback notes.
