A couple of things:
The Dove bottle needs to be facing the camera. Flat. Not at an angle. We need to see all of the front of the bottle.
Jenn's hair later on in the commercial needs to look better than the first shot. I think her hair looked better in the before-Dove section. The whole before and after thing...
I like the shot at the end. But, and this isn't meaning to offend anyone, what is the actress doing in that last shot? It needs to be more clear. If she's using Dove and all is well, she should be lathering her shoulder or arms up and we should see it. Right now, it looks like she's... well... just rubbing herself.
The music maybe should play up the whole Paris motif? Squeaky accordion music at first and then a more sensual Piaf-like sound towards the end?
Is Jenn in Paris? It looks like it.
The graphic next to Jenn in the shower with the Dove bottle should be smoother, again more sensual.
I like the shower squeak at the beginning.
I love the way the bathroom looked.
I love Jenn.
I think this is a cool commercial.
