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Old 01-03-2008, 01:06 PM   #23
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Looks great!

I love the eye roll and look of disgust/despair right before the soap dropping.

I agree that it takes to long for the product to come out of the bottle, and there is a look on Jen's face that can be misconstrued as boredom while waiting for it to happen. I also think the music might want to be 'softened' up a bit if it's possible.

Also, at the end I'm not really sure what Jen is doing. Can the graphic be moved to still cover but show some washing?

Is the pink bottle at the end stock? Is it possible to replace it with the same type used? It adds a moment of product confusion.
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