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Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!)
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01-03-2008, 04:29 PM
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Oh, and one other difference to note between the takes, just after the soap drop:
"throw away the ordinary and indulge." (Take 1)
"drop the ordinary and indulge." (Take 2)
Which do you think sounds better?
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