Ok, how about the line, "Enjoy a little luxury, everyday" as a solitary spoken line at the end?
Would it be best to speak them over the words, or remove that shot and just say it over the shower/tray scene (and lengthen that a couple seconds to compensate)?
Oh, and who has a good voice around here, a microphone, and a way to record a file and email it to me?
(I know you people who have Skype can possibly manage!)