05-19-2009, 11:41 AM
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Chowder Head
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Yes
Posts: 18,500
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My $0.02
- Idea on the logo is good, but I don't like the execution. It looks too much like two disparate parts kluged together. The transition needs to me much smoother so that the two parts flow together more smoothly.
- If possible, try to have the logo blend in with the other elements (text) of the card more: do more wrapping (not make letters with the logo; just have the logo interact with the text). Make it look less like a logo just stuck in the middle of the card. I am not creative enough to help you accomplish this: just my opinion.
- The colors and overall look on the card are too generic, too bland. I like clean looks, but this one is just flat. Use the brown/copper/Steampunk colors and theme from your web site more.
- No generic email. You have a long domain name (hard to get away from these days), so keep the address before the '@" short. But get that email set up; it will help lend professionalism to who you are.
- Minor detail I just noticed from your site: you list photography as one of your services. However, your equipment list includes no still photography equipment. Don't know if this is a problem, but I did notice this.
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