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Old 05-19-2009, 11:41 AM   #9
Kevy Baby
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My $0.02
  1. Idea on the logo is good, but I don't like the execution. It looks too much like two disparate parts kluged together. The transition needs to me much smoother so that the two parts flow together more smoothly.
  2. If possible, try to have the logo blend in with the other elements (text) of the card more: do more wrapping (not make letters with the logo; just have the logo interact with the text). Make it look less like a logo just stuck in the middle of the card. I am not creative enough to help you accomplish this: just my opinion.
  3. The colors and overall look on the card are too generic, too bland. I like clean looks, but this one is just flat. Use the brown/copper/Steampunk colors and theme from your web site more.
  4. No generic email. You have a long domain name (hard to get away from these days), so keep the address before the '@" short. But get that email set up; it will help lend professionalism to who you are.
  5. Minor detail I just noticed from your site: you list photography as one of your services. However, your equipment list includes no still photography equipment. Don't know if this is a problem, but I did notice this.
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