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Interesting. It did seem sad to me. I thought it was good writing, but it didn't captivate me like I felt it could have. I can't pinpoint why. I could definitely see it turning into something Coffee and Cigarettes-ish. Keep up the good work.
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And now Harry, let us step into the night and pursue that flighty temptress, adventure! - Albus Dumbledore
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