Ohhh, the Cult of Disney...I like it.
I also like Eliza's analysis- the tie in for the characters needs to be fleshed out, or made stronger. Is it (at this point, anyway) the fact that they all have Disney items or interests, or is something going to happen to bring all of these people together? I don't have a sense of where it's going, be it good or bad. Usually weather or character's moods can set up the type of atmosphere you want to convey- a sense of calm, foreboding, intrigue, etc. I like it and I understand that you are in the early stages of construction, so it's hard to offer any helpful critiques. I want to see your next draft!!!
