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Old 06-04-2012, 02:33 PM   #1503
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Originally Posted by Alex View Post
I didn't even get to the point of noticing plot holes as no plot had happened yet.

Just something about the tone and pacing of that opening left me saying "this is just going to make a long flight worse."
It was very slow to start and a slow crawl to the finish
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