[Strangler Lewis]

Call me old fashioned, but I don't understand editing something just to post it on Facebook--though much on Facebook certainly merits editing, deletion even. One edits things like this to submit somewhere that has an Editor with a capital E who might say, "Yes, this is good. Here's $25.00." You might consider shaping this to send to a parenting magazine, to Newsweek for a "My Turn," etc.