wow, you guys think about this stuff way more than I do. the ones I write, they come out....blah blah blah.....try to make it make sense, blah blah blah. at the end, if I read it and like it....*click* post.
I liked this one. couldnt tell you how to make it better. thats all subjective anyway (IMO).
best advice, write what you feel. say it out loud...if it hits where you want....its a winner.
