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CP, those are all great suggestions/ideas. I'm not really "using' the poem for anything, so I suppose I'll just leave it, but those tips will definitely help me next time. I can almost guarantee that my teen poetry was awful-er than yours. I have no way to prove it, as those got thrown out long ago. :P
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And now Harry, let us step into the night and pursue that flighty temptress, adventure! - Albus Dumbledore
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