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Old 09-29-2006, 02:59 PM   #13
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Originally Posted by innerSpaceman
The concept that there should be a percentage of active vs. passive sentences, or that one or another should be avoided ... is moronic on its face to me.
As far as percentages go, I didn't necessarily mean it in the literal sense, as if I should be striving for 6% and anything written that exceeds it is automatically garbage. Rather, I'm just trying to get a feel for for what a reasonable balance between the two should be.

Interestingly enough, when it comes to music, an area in which I do have a firm grasp of "the rules", I spend a lot of time breaking them and look upon most of them as silly. I trust my ear to tell me what sounds acceptable and what doesn't at this point. However, when something sounds wrong to me, I generally know why.

And that is the purpose of my post (upon more reflection), not to truly define what is acceptable or not, I suppose, but rather learn a bit more about the "why and why not" so that I can improve. I do understand that it all has to be taken with a grain of salt and that, ultimately, it is about how the words sound and how clearly they convey the message, that is important.
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