Sickness & Health

€uroMeinke · 02-02-2005, 04:50 PM

Alive again
Not that I was dead
But rather stupefied
Like a zombie

Moving like the undea
Pleasureless
Indiscriminant
Without love or reason

I awoke today
With purpose once again
Things to do
Deadlines to catch

So much it’s overwhelming
And I wonder
Do I really want
This resurrection?

So reluctantly I rise
Beg forgiveness
For my forgetfulness
And return to my life

Already in progress

Eliza Hodgkins 1812 · 02-02-2005, 05:33 PM

"Return to my life

Already in progress."

I really like those ideas strung together so.

FEJ · 02-02-2005, 08:24 PM

Gemini Cricket · 02-02-2005, 08:51 PM

Yay!

I'll agree with EH1812, the last two sentences are great.

lindyhop · 02-02-2005, 09:00 PM

Very nice.

wendybeth · 02-02-2005, 09:21 PM

Very cool, €uro! (Although I think the dying virus within you might beg to differ). Glad you're back with us, although I will miss your fever/cold med ramblings- er, ruminations....

Now stay healthy, dammit!

blueerica · 02-03-2005, 07:16 AM

Very retro/TV vibe to it, swimming with multiple meanings. BTW -- When was the last time you heard "And now we return to __________, already in progress..." ??? We still get "News breaks" etc.. But I don't remember the last time I heard that.. Hmmm..

Now I'll hear it 3 times daily! (I always feel like I'm signing up for something big when I give grandiose statements that allude to never and always...

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Cadaverous Pallor · 02-03-2005, 11:15 AM

Betty · 02-03-2005, 02:23 PM

02-02-2005, 04:50 PM	#1
€uroMeinke L'Hédoniste Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: A.S.C.O.T. Posts: 8,671	Sickness & Health Alive again Not that I was dead But rather stupefied Like a zombie Moving like the undea Pleasureless Indiscriminant Without love or reason I awoke today With purpose once again Things to do Deadlines to catch So much it’s overwhelming And I wonder Do I really want This resurrection? So reluctantly I rise Beg forgiveness For my forgetfulness And return to my life Already in progress __________________ I would believe only in a God that knows how to Dance. Friedrich Nietzsche
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02-02-2005, 05:33 PM	#2
Eliza Hodgkins 1812 Sputnik Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Long Beach Posts: 2,685	"Return to my life Already in progress." I really like those ideas strung together so.
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02-02-2005, 08:24 PM	#3
FEJ Living Now Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 563
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02-02-2005, 08:51 PM	#4
Gemini Cricket ... Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 13,244	Yay! I'll agree with EH1812, the last two sentences are great.
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02-02-2005, 09:00 PM	#5
lindyhop Swing Swank Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Long Beach Posts: 997	Very nice.
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02-02-2005, 09:21 PM	#6
wendybeth Nevermind Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 7,847	Very cool, €uro! (Although I think the dying virus within you might beg to differ). Glad you're back with us, although I will miss your fever/cold med ramblings- er, ruminations.... Now stay healthy, dammit! __________________
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02-03-2005, 07:16 AM	#7
blueerica Nueve Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 6,497	Very retro/TV vibe to it, swimming with multiple meanings. BTW -- When was the last time you heard "And now we return to __________, already in progress..." ??? We still get "News breaks" etc.. But I don't remember the last time I heard that.. Hmmm.. Now I'll hear it 3 times daily! (I always feel like I'm signing up for something big when I give grandiose statements that allude to never and always... ) __________________ Tomorrow is the day for you and me
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02-03-2005, 11:15 AM	#8
Cadaverous Pallor ohhhh baby Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Parental Bliss Posts: 12,364	__________________ The second star to the right shines in the night for you
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02-03-2005, 02:23 PM	#9
Betty Kicking up my heels! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: The Silver State Posts: 3,783
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