Help me edit this poem please - Page 3

SacTown Chronic · 01-06-2009, 09:01 PM

Quote:

I kissed your forehead,
said the sweet and poetic
things that one might say to the dying,

I kissed your forehead,
said the sweet, poetic lies
that one might say to the dying

/me likey!
//just noticed the dates in this thread

///so uh, Traci, wanna do it?

tracilicious · 01-07-2009, 09:38 PM

Ooh, that would be interesting! But the best part about having it published, is that I don't have to edit anymore!

Thanks though.

01-07-2009, 09:38 PM	#22
tracilicious avatar transition Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: in-between Posts: 2,487	Ooh, that would be interesting! But the best part about having it published, is that I don't have to edit anymore! Thanks though. __________________ And now Harry, let us step into the night and pursue that flighty temptress, adventure! - Albus Dumbledore
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