I

Gemini Cricket · 03-15-2006, 11:09 AM

I
by GC

I can be leaned on
often I won't
bend.

I can be counted on
I'm as loyal as a
friend.

I can make you laugh
sometimes I am a
clown.

I can pick you up
but my eyes can throw you
down.

I can make you think
I've lived my share of
life.

I can make you cry
my tongue can be a
knife.

I can make you mad
if there's a flame to
stoke.

I can take your love
and fix it when it's
broke.

I can give it to you in return
upon special
request.

But I can make you weary
like an ever present
guest.

And on that right occasion
I'm one to make you
moan.

But I'm not your self-esteem
you got to build that
on
your
own.

Capt Jack · 03-15-2006, 02:53 PM

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You must spread some Mojo around before giving it to Gemini Cricket again.

dammit.

none the less.

Motorboat Cruiser · 03-15-2006, 04:17 PM

I really enjoyed that, GC.

Ghoulish Delight · 03-15-2006, 04:25 PM

Solid.

Snowflake · 03-15-2006, 06:13 PM

Wonderful, GC!

CoasterMatt · 03-15-2006, 07:02 PM

I like it, I like it!

sleepyjeff · 03-15-2006, 08:47 PM

....That was great

Tramspotter · 03-16-2006, 09:49 AM

Second

of the day...

dig it.

Brother to the night says: "Don't give up da fight!"

DisneyDaniel · 03-16-2006, 10:25 AM

I really enjoyed reading "I" and love that "I" is also about "you."

Gemini Cricket · 03-16-2006, 11:33 AM

Thank you for the kind comments, y'all!

This one was about an argument I witnessed my friends having. He came to the conclusion, at the end of their argument, that he could be everything to her but no matter what, she was responsible for the way she felt about herself. He said something like, 'I'm your husband, not your savior.' That stuck with me.

03-15-2006, 11:09 AM	#1
Gemini Cricket ... Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 13,244	I I by GC I can be leaned on often I won't bend. I can be counted on I'm as loyal as a friend. I can make you laugh sometimes I am a clown. I can pick you up but my eyes can throw you down. I can make you think I've lived my share of life. I can make you cry my tongue can be a knife. I can make you mad if there's a flame to stoke. I can take your love and fix it when it's broke. I can give it to you in return upon special request. But I can make you weary like an ever present guest. And on that right occasion I'm one to make you moan. But I'm not your self-esteem you got to build that on your own.
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03-15-2006, 04:17 PM	#3
Motorboat Cruiser Cruiser of Motorboats Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: So Cal Posts: 3,665	I really enjoyed that, GC.
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03-15-2006, 04:25 PM	#4
Ghoulish Delight I Floop the Pig Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Alternative Swankstyle Posts: 19,348	Solid. __________________ 'He who receives an idea from me, receives instruction himself without lessening mine; as he who lights his taper at mine, receives light without darkening me.' -TJ
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03-15-2006, 06:13 PM	#5
Snowflake lost in the fog Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: San Francisco Posts: 7,831	Wonderful, GC! __________________ Be yourself; everyone else is already taken. - Oscar Wilde
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CoasterMatt BRAAAAAAAINS! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: One Step Beyond... Posts: 8,802	I like it, I like it! __________________ Do you like my photography? Visit photosbymatt.tumblr.com to purchase prints!
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03-15-2006, 08:47 PM	#7
sleepyjeff Go Hawks Go! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Parkrose Posts: 2,632	....That was great __________________ River Guardian-less
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03-16-2006, 09:49 AM	#8
Tramspotter Show me on the bear. Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: LA Posts: 445	Second of the day... dig it. Brother to the night says: "Don't give up da fight!"
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03-16-2006, 10:25 AM	#9
DisneyDaniel California Adventurer Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: SoCal Posts: 537	I really enjoyed reading "I" and love that "I" is also about "you." __________________ Yes, I do LOVE Disney California Adventure. Disneyland is not so bad either ;-)
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03-16-2006, 11:33 AM	#10
Gemini Cricket ... Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 13,244	Thank you for the kind comments, y'all! This one was about an argument I witnessed my friends having. He came to the conclusion, at the end of their argument, that he could be everything to her but no matter what, she was responsible for the way she felt about herself. He said something like, 'I'm your husband, not your savior.' That stuck with me.
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