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Old 01-03-2008, 09:29 PM   #1
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Ok, and my last take for the night (thank the gods): Take 4

(Click here for the alternate Google upload.)

This version fixes the bottle suckage, the shake in the shower/mirror scene, and includes one of Dove's stock music selections.

Damn, I'm tired, and my butt hurts.
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Old 01-03-2008, 09:53 PM   #2
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Damn, I'm tired, and my butt hurts.

Silly, that's not where the Dove bottle goes.
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Old 01-03-2008, 09:30 PM   #3
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I kinda like the fourth one the most, but that's just me.
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Old 01-03-2008, 09:47 PM   #4
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I really like the 4th one. I'd be curious to see how it is with the other 2 musical options (to be unique). Still distracted by the mirror.

Also, I noticed in the 3rd and 4th takes the 'Dove' on the bottle Jen is holding isn't prominent. Is there a way to spotlight it?

I'll see if I can get a few people at work take a look at it tomorrow.
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I like 4 best of all. The music comes in a little too abruptly, but it works well.

I like the fog on the mirror at the end. Jenn's washing herself. Nice.

You know, I may just blush the next time I see CP in person...

Good job, T!
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I like the edit of the 4th, but still like the music from take 3.
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Is it me... or is the music in take 4 a little higher than the other takes?

(at least the decibel meeter says the audio in the beginning in both takes are about same... but music are in different levels in take 3 (average) and higher (take 4)
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Do not like the music in 4 at all, but love everything else about it.
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Do not like the music in 4 at all, but love everything else about it.
It can't all be Danny Elfman, you know...
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So true.

I still like MBC's music in Take 1 best. I do not like the music in 4 at all.
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