Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!) - Page 15

Nephythys · 01-05-2008, 03:54 PM

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Originally Posted by Disneyphile

I'm going to title it "Drop the Ordinary" and it will be in the video gallery under "most recent". I'm also supposed to get a direct link after the entry is approved, at which time I'll post it.

Perfect!

Deebs · 01-05-2008, 03:53 PM

I love both versions of Take 5. I thought I was going to prefer it without the VO, my fear being that it would disturb the tranquil vibe you had going. I don't think it does though. CP, you did a fabulous job on the VO! The words blend in seamlessly and are not jarring at all.

And after looking at some of the other submissions? Psh! I am even more awed by your talents, T.

Disneyphile · 01-05-2008, 03:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Deebs

And after looking at some of the other submissions? Psh! I am even more awed by your talents, T.

Thanks.

Morrigoon · 01-05-2008, 04:43 PM

I would just like to point out that in addition to the awesome filmmaking abilities of Disneyphile, another person deserves compliments here: CP, your performance is really great!

As much as I like CP's voiceover in 5+, It's a bit jarring to suddenly have a voice. Had there been a VO at the opening too, say, before the shower sound kicks in, or while Jen is rolling her eyes and before the soap drop, then it might have worked better for me, but with the rest of the ad being so quiet, I think it's better w/out the VO.

Gemini Cricket · 01-05-2008, 04:44 PM

Hmm.
I like the VO version of 5.

wolfy999 · 01-05-2008, 04:45 PM

Take 5 VO has my vote.

Disneyphile · 01-05-2008, 05:17 PM

Y'all are more indecisive than me.

Heh.

I'll wait until a few more chime in at least.

figment1986 · 01-05-2008, 05:19 PM

hmm... the voice over sounds nice... but seems to make the video unbalanced with the no voice until then... but I'm just a student of RTV and never did get good grades on my commercials.

The VO is nice... Its your entry, up to you.

Gemini Cricket · 01-05-2008, 05:20 PM

Are Jenn and Greg going to be in the sequel?

wendybeth · 01-05-2008, 07:48 PM

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Originally Posted by Gemini Cricket

Are Jenn and Greg going to be in the sequel?

Lol- I thought of that as well, but in a humorous way: The shower curtain is drawn and all that can be seen is a person's silhouette as they drizzle the soap onto a loofah sponge. As the person soaps up, a male voice says something like "Wow- this is great!" (in an Herbal Essence sort of way, borderline orgasmic). Then Jenn pokes her head in the shower, and your see a totally soaped up Greg looking startled and then guilty as she glares at him for using her stuff.

Let's not even go into the KB version.

(I love the VO- I think it's perfect!

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01-05-2008, 03:53 PM	#2
Deebs ... Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 961	I love both versions of Take 5. I thought I was going to prefer it without the VO, my fear being that it would disturb the tranquil vibe you had going. I don't think it does though. CP, you did a fabulous job on the VO! The words blend in seamlessly and are not jarring at all. And after looking at some of the other submissions? Psh! I am even more awed by your talents, T.
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Morrigoon I throw stones at houses Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Location: Location Posts: 9,534	I would just like to point out that in addition to the awesome filmmaking abilities of Disneyphile, another person deserves compliments here: CP, your performance is really great! As much as I like CP's voiceover in 5+, It's a bit jarring to suddenly have a voice. Had there been a VO at the opening too, say, before the shower sound kicks in, or while Jen is rolling her eyes and before the soap drop, then it might have worked better for me, but with the rest of the ad being so quiet, I think it's better w/out the VO. __________________ http://bash.org/?top "It is useless for sheep to pass a resolution in favor of vegetarianism while wolves remain of a different opinion." -- William Randolph Inge
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Gemini Cricket ... Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 13,244	Hmm. I like the VO version of 5.
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01-05-2008, 04:45 PM	#6
wolfy999 Eyes like Sapphires! Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: 2.4 miles from Disneyland Posts: 1,523	Take 5 VO has my vote. __________________ Diane "Honesty may be the best policy, but it's important to remember that apparently, by elimination, dishonesty is the second-best policy." - George Carlin 1937-2008 DISNEY IS FINALLY PAYING ME BACK......STILL OWES ME ABOUT (oh, wait....way too much)!
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Disneyphile SQUIRREL! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: On the curbside. Posts: 5,098	Y'all are more indecisive than me. Heh. I'll wait until a few more chime in at least.
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figment1986 Join the Darkside Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Within 78 miles of WDW... Posts: 307	hmm... the voice over sounds nice... but seems to make the video unbalanced with the no voice until then... but I'm just a student of RTV and never did get good grades on my commercials. The VO is nice... Its your entry, up to you.
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01-05-2008, 05:20 PM	#9
Gemini Cricket ... Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 13,244	Are Jenn and Greg going to be in the sequel?
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