Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!)

[Disneyphile]

Ok, here's Take 2.

I don't personally like the European music, but I'd love to hear if you all like it. I think the other one works better for the scene, but whatever.

Now, I'll start on Take 3, starting with NM's marketing notes.

(It's a good thing Ken just brought me some lunch during his lunch break...)