Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!)

Alex · 01-03-2008, 07:45 PM

One little thing I like about Take 3 that is different from the first two.

At the end, with the text:

Enjoy a little luxury, everyday

<<Dove bottle>>

dovecreamoil.com

Your titles are exactly aligned and over the "Dove" label on the body wash bottle. I'm reading the text of the first line and it blends to the bottle and immediately, with no eye movement at all I'm reading the brand name, and then without eye movement I am reading the action prompt (dovecreamoil.com).

In the other takes they are close but not really aligned.

01-03-2008, 07:45 PM	#11
Alex . Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 13,354	One little thing I like about Take 3 that is different from the first two. At the end, with the text: Enjoy a little luxury, everyday <<Dove bottle>> dovecreamoil.com Your titles are exactly aligned and over the "Dove" label on the body wash bottle. I'm reading the text of the first line and it blends to the bottle and immediately, with no eye movement at all I'm reading the brand name, and then without eye movement I am reading the action prompt (dovecreamoil.com). In the other takes they are close but not really aligned.
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