Feedback Please: New Business Logo Concept

[Andrew]

First impression: it's a little bland. Overall I like the steampunk-looking mechanical graphic from your Web page better than the filmstrip, though I can see the filmstrip as making the film/video point. But what is the film supposed to be twisting into?

One other note (you did say you wanted honest feedback...): I suggest using an email address with your business domain rather than mac.com. Using a generic email address (mac, gmail, aol, whatever) for a business says to me "amateur" or at least "didn't bother to set up email forwarding at custom domain".

[Disneyphile]

Originally Posted by Andrew

But what is the film supposed to be twisting into?

To me, it's painting a concept. But, then again, my brain's quite obscure at times, so that's why I need others to look at it. What makes sense to me, might not to the masses, and it's the latter that I need to speak to here. So, now I know it might not be conveying my thought, and that's what I need to know. Thanks for that!

"didn't bother to set up email forwarding at custom domain".

You hit that one on the head. I have an email with my domain, but I've yet to set it up. Good point to get on that prior to making new business cards, etc., because I didn't think of it as a priority. Good one!

I'm also thinking of a main business tagline of "Dream. See. Do." But, I'm afraid that when spoken, it sounds like I'm taking off on a wave-runner first thing in the morning. Any thoughts on that?

[BarTopDancer]

Originally Posted by Andrew

One other note (you did say you wanted honest feedback...): I suggest using an email address with your business domain rather than mac.com. Using a generic email address (mac, gmail, aol, whatever) for a business says to me "amateur" or at least "didn't bother to set up email forwarding at custom domain".

I'd also suggest when you set it up to keep the 'to' name short since totaldynamicstudios[dot]com is a lot to type. info@, productions@ [firstname]@, [firstinitiallastname]@