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Old 10-22-2009, 01:37 PM   #11
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Here's how the Brody confronts the Mayor scene should have gone.

Larry the Mayor: "I'm sorry, Martin."

Brody decks Larry and he goes sprawling across the hospital floor.

End scene.


Quint's dialogue starts before the previous scene ends. I find that to be so right on and effective. It starts the pace of the movie flowing faster as we head into the 3rd act.
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