Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!)

[Cadaverous Pallor]

Bwahahah! This is all too crazy for me.

If you would like to me to record "tired of the same old shower?" I can try that as well. Though my worry then is inconsistency if I don't say the middle part, and overdoing it if I do say all the lines, like I'm reading a powerpoint presentation out loud.

I can't even say which version I like better. I can see the pros and cons for both.

[Disneyphile]

I don't want a VO at the beginning, because I don't want to take away from the shower knob squeak. I think that draws enough attention.

The end VO works, because CP said it so relaxed that it fits. But, then again, the commercial speaks for itself without needing a voice.

I'd also love to see what our marketing guru thinks, since a VO was his idea.

But, yeah, I couldn't have gotten a better actress than CP. There are only so many things one can "fix in post", and bad acting is not one of them. Thankfully, I didn't have to worry about that one bit.

[wendybeth]

Originally Posted by Gemini Cricket

Are Jenn and Greg going to be in the sequel?

Lol- I thought of that as well, but in a humorous way: The shower curtain is drawn and all that can be seen is a person's silhouette as they drizzle the soap onto a loofah sponge. As the person soaps up, a male voice says something like "Wow- this is great!" (in an Herbal Essence sort of way, borderline orgasmic). Then Jenn pokes her head in the shower, and your see a totally soaped up Greg looking startled and then guilty as she glares at him for using her stuff.


Let's not even go into the KB version.


(I love the VO- I think it's perfect! ).

[Disneyphile]

Ok. It's entered. (The VO version.) It said approval will take up to 24 hours before it appears in the gallery.

Commence nervous freakout.

[wendybeth]

Yayyyy! I think you did great, and I nervously await the results as well!

[Disneyphile]

The five finalists will be announced by the 23rd. It's a long-ass time to the 23rd. And, here I am sweating over the next 24 hours.

Ah, hell. Who needs sleep anyway?

[~MS~]

Oh cool! I went and looked at the others, NO creative energy flowing in them for me at all...you are going to wipe them off the shower walls T!

[BarTopDancer]

Let us know when it's up.

Oscar party anyone?

I really know better than to post without looking at the calendar.

[Disneyphile]

Originally Posted by BarTopDancer

Oscar party anyone?

Should it make it to the finals, we get a hotel stay in Hollywood that weekend. You can bet your butt we'd throw a party.

[BarTopDancer]

Originally Posted by Disneyphile

Should it make it to the finals, we get a hotel stay in Hollywood that weekend. You can bet your butt we'd throw a party.

Originally Posted by Disneyphile

The five finalists will be announced by the 23rd. It's a long-ass time to the 23rd. And, here I am sweating over the next 24 hours.

Ah, hell. Who needs sleep anyway?

The 23rd is 17 days away. You'll be able to check and see the * rating go up and up because, lady, your's knocks the pants off anything else out there!