Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!) - Page 16

~MS~ · 01-05-2008, 05:21 PM

Take 5 with the VO is my vote, Jenny did an amazing job of making sure if someone had looked away they'd snap back to see the tv at that point.

Cadaverous Pallor · 01-05-2008, 05:38 PM

Bwahahah!

This is all too crazy for me.

If you would like to me to record "tired of the same old shower?" I can try that as well. Though my worry then is inconsistency if I don't say the middle part, and overdoing it if I do say all the lines, like I'm reading a powerpoint presentation out loud.

I can't even say which version I like better. I can see the pros and cons for both.

Disneyphile · 01-05-2008, 05:44 PM

I don't want a VO at the beginning, because I don't want to take away from the shower knob squeak. I think that draws enough attention.

The end VO works, because CP said it so relaxed that it fits. But, then again, the commercial speaks for itself without needing a voice.

I'd also love to see what our marketing guru thinks, since a VO was his idea.

But, yeah, I couldn't have gotten a better actress than CP.

There are only so many things one can "fix in post", and bad acting is not one of them. Thankfully, I didn't have to worry about that one bit.

Disneyphile · 01-05-2008, 07:49 PM

Ok. It's entered. (The VO version.) It said approval will take up to 24 hours before it appears in the gallery.

Commence nervous freakout.

wendybeth · 01-05-2008, 07:50 PM

Yayyyy! I think you did great, and I nervously await the results as well!

~MS~ · 01-05-2008, 07:52 PM

Oh cool! I went and looked at the others, NO creative energy flowing in them for me at all...you are going to wipe them off the shower walls T!

Disneyphile · 01-05-2008, 07:52 PM

The five finalists will be announced by the 23rd. It's a long-ass time to the 23rd. And, here I am sweating over the next 24 hours.

Ah, hell. Who needs sleep anyway?

BarTopDancer · 01-05-2008, 07:57 PM

Let us know when it's up.

~~Oscar party anyone?~~

I really know better than to post without looking at the calendar.

Disneyphile · 01-05-2008, 08:02 PM

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Originally Posted by BarTopDancer

~~Oscar party anyone?~~

Should it make it to the finals, we get a hotel stay in Hollywood that weekend. You can bet your butt we'd throw a party.

BarTopDancer · 01-05-2008, 08:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Disneyphile

Should it make it to the finals, we get a hotel stay in Hollywood that weekend. You can bet your butt we'd throw a party.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Disneyphile

The five finalists will be announced by the 23rd. It's a long-ass time to the 23rd. And, here I am sweating over the next 24 hours.

Ah, hell. Who needs sleep anyway?

The 23rd is 17 days away. You'll be able to check and see the * rating go up and up because, lady, your's knocks the pants off anything else out there!

01-05-2008, 05:21 PM	#1
~MS~ One Happy little Missy! Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 658	Take 5 with the VO is my vote, Jenny did an amazing job of making sure if someone had looked away they'd snap back to see the tv at that point. __________________ "Sometimes Miracles Hide"
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01-05-2008, 05:38 PM	#2
Cadaverous Pallor ohhhh baby Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Parental Bliss Posts: 12,364	Bwahahah! This is all too crazy for me. If you would like to me to record "tired of the same old shower?" I can try that as well. Though my worry then is inconsistency if I don't say the middle part, and overdoing it if I do say all the lines, like I'm reading a powerpoint presentation out loud. I can't even say which version I like better. I can see the pros and cons for both. __________________ The second star to the right shines in the night for you
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01-05-2008, 05:44 PM	#3
Disneyphile SQUIRREL! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: On the curbside. Posts: 5,098	I don't want a VO at the beginning, because I don't want to take away from the shower knob squeak. I think that draws enough attention. The end VO works, because CP said it so relaxed that it fits. But, then again, the commercial speaks for itself without needing a voice. I'd also love to see what our marketing guru thinks, since a VO was his idea. But, yeah, I couldn't have gotten a better actress than CP. There are only so many things one can "fix in post", and bad acting is not one of them. Thankfully, I didn't have to worry about that one bit.
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01-05-2008, 07:49 PM	#4
Disneyphile SQUIRREL! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: On the curbside. Posts: 5,098	Ok. It's entered. (The VO version.) It said approval will take up to 24 hours before it appears in the gallery. Commence nervous freakout.
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01-05-2008, 07:50 PM	#5
wendybeth Nevermind Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 7,847	Yayyyy! I think you did great, and I nervously await the results as well! __________________
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01-05-2008, 07:52 PM	#6
~MS~ One Happy little Missy! Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 658	Oh cool! I went and looked at the others, NO creative energy flowing in them for me at all...you are going to wipe them off the shower walls T! __________________ "Sometimes Miracles Hide"
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01-05-2008, 07:57 PM	#8
BarTopDancer Prepping... Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Here, there, everywhere Posts: 11,405	Let us know when it's up. ~~Oscar party anyone?~~ I really know better than to post without looking at the calendar. __________________ Spork is the new MacGyver Postcards From My Edge
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