Attack of the haikus! - Page 15

MerryPrankster · 04-18-2005, 08:33 PM

Neighborhood troll man
Trimming dead daisy plants in
magenta sweat pants.

His crazy dog roams
the street in search of relief
In neighboring yards.

Isaac · 04-18-2005, 10:52 PM

scissors to her skin
when she does relief sinks in
hide scars beneath clothes

Ghoulish Delight · 04-19-2005, 09:42 AM

A short term reprieve.
My dentist rescheduled me.
Two more weeks to go.

Tramspotter · 02-13-2006, 04:56 PM

Playing paintball hard
Made me feel seventeen (The pain slowed after the second game)
sore legs screem thirty

I Gained much respect
For the old tadgerrs of yore (we made fun of them for not going all out)
all gear to much fear

they threw gobs of paint
the cost wasen't a killer (paints cheep thier knees aren't)
beats jumping bunkers

I woke this day rise
pain enveloped dismay
smells of tigerbalm (not Bengay)

Convelessing now
limping round like grandpa jones (but good god not next weekend)
want to go again

scaeagles · 02-13-2006, 05:52 PM

Resurrection Day
For the long lost haiku thread
thank you Tramspotter

Alex · 02-13-2006, 07:22 PM

the format is lame
paucity of syllables
does not denote wit

also note that
lack of nature and code words
makes it a senryu

古池や蛙飛込む水の音　

wendybeth · 02-13-2006, 07:55 PM

Who cares if it's lame
we will continue to play
so long as it's fun

Alex · 02-13-2006, 08:05 PM

this is fine, of course,
pleasure is reason enough
just sharing my view

wendybeth · 02-13-2006, 09:15 PM

No problem Alex-
so it's faux haiku at best
sans codes and nature.

Still, we must persist
especially since we know
how it annoys you.

scaeagles · 02-13-2006, 09:21 PM

Poems with a purpose
Try to annoy Alex Stroup
Wendy annoys me

04-18-2005, 08:33 PM	#141
MerryPrankster Swanky Panky! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Hell's Kitchen Posts: 541	Neighborhood troll man Trimming dead daisy plants in magenta sweat pants. His crazy dog roams the street in search of relief In neighboring yards. __________________ My advice to the women of America is to raise more hell and fewer dahlias. ~~ William Allen White
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04-18-2005, 10:52 PM	#142
Isaac the one n only Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Anaheim Posts: 1,236	scissors to her skin when she does relief sinks in hide scars beneath clothes __________________
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04-19-2005, 09:42 AM	#143
Ghoulish Delight I Floop the Pig Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Alternative Swankstyle Posts: 19,348	A short term reprieve. My dentist rescheduled me. Two more weeks to go. __________________ 'He who receives an idea from me, receives instruction himself without lessening mine; as he who lights his taper at mine, receives light without darkening me.' -TJ
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02-13-2006, 04:56 PM	#144
Tramspotter Show me on the bear. Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: LA Posts: 445	Playing paintball hard Made me feel seventeen (The pain slowed after the second game) sore legs screem thirty I Gained much respect For the old tadgerrs of yore (we made fun of them for not going all out) all gear to much fear they threw gobs of paint the cost wasen't a killer (paints cheep thier knees aren't) beats jumping bunkers I woke this day rise pain enveloped dismay smells of tigerbalm (not Bengay) Convelessing now limping round like grandpa jones (but good god not next weekend) want to go again
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02-13-2006, 05:52 PM	#145
scaeagles I LIKE! Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 7,819	Resurrection Day For the long lost haiku thread thank you Tramspotter
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02-13-2006, 07:22 PM	#146
Alex . Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 13,354	the format is lame paucity of syllables does not denote wit also note that lack of nature and code words makes it a senryu 古池や蛙飛込む水の音
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02-13-2006, 07:55 PM	#147
wendybeth Nevermind Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 7,847	Who cares if it's lame we will continue to play so long as it's fun __________________
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02-13-2006, 08:05 PM	#148
Alex . Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 13,354	this is fine, of course, pleasure is reason enough just sharing my view
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02-13-2006, 09:15 PM	#149
wendybeth Nevermind Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 7,847	No problem Alex- so it's faux haiku at best sans codes and nature. Still, we must persist especially since we know how it annoys you. __________________
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02-13-2006, 09:21 PM	#150
scaeagles I LIKE! Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 7,819	Poems with a purpose Try to annoy Alex Stroup Wendy annoys me
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