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Morrigoon
04-25-2007, 04:42 PM
My melancholy
Life, softly greyed like June gloom
Where July never comes
Snowflake
04-25-2007, 04:43 PM
:snap:
loved it!

But sorry for the melancholy
flippyshark
04-25-2007, 04:51 PM
Very nice. (And an interestingly modified haiku - with one extra beat.)

:snap:
Morrigoon
04-25-2007, 05:36 PM
Very nice. (And an interestingly modified haiku - with one extra beat.)

:snap:

Crap! gotta fix that.
Morrigoon
04-25-2007, 05:38 PM
My melancholy
Life, softly greyed like June gloom
Where July never comes

My melancholy
Life, softly greyed like June gloom
July never comes

^That's how I originally wanted to do it, but for some reason in my brain I gave July one syllable, so I had added in "where".