€uromeinke, FEJ. and Ghoulish Delight RULE!!! NA abides.
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04-25-2007, 04:42 PM
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Melancholy
My melancholy
Life, softly greyed like June gloom Where July never comes
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04-25-2007, 04:43 PM
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 loved it! But sorry for the melancholy |
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04-25-2007, 04:51 PM
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Very nice. (And an interestingly modified haiku - with one extra beat.)
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04-25-2007, 05:36 PM
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Life, softly greyed like June gloom July never comes ^That's how I originally wanted to do it, but for some reason in my brain I gave July one syllable, so I had added in "where".
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