It's hard to be objective. Good friend shooting, good friend starting, good friend composting, my newly re-done bathroom (and even my photography is featured).........But here goes anyways. The uncomfortable moment is waiting for the soap to come out of the bottle. It just takes a bit too long. I agree that you don't know what Jen is "looking at" in the end shot. ("Man, I need to shave my pubes" comes to mind.
). I love the pacing of the music, it works perfectly. I think that it could be a bit "prettier" to fit the product.
I love the concept of the reflection shot!!!! Love Jen's expression of disgust and I love the soap dropping.
So, there's my very un-objective $.02.