Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!)

Not Afraid · 01-03-2008, 12:10 PM

It's hard to be objective. Good friend shooting, good friend starting, good friend composting, my newly re-done bathroom (and even my photography is featured).........But here goes anyways. The uncomfortable moment is waiting for the soap to come out of the bottle. It just takes a bit too long. I agree that you don't know what Jen is "looking at" in the end shot. ("Man, I need to shave my pubes" comes to mind.

). I love the pacing of the music, it works perfectly. I think that it could be a bit "prettier" to fit the product.

I love the concept of the reflection shot!!!! Love Jen's expression of disgust and I love the soap dropping.

So, there's my very un-objective $.02.

Kevy Baby · 01-03-2008, 12:36 PM

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Originally Posted by Not Afraid

...and I love the soap dropping.

Kudos to Frodo Potter for his excellent soap dropping skills; a talent I understand he studied in depth with iSm.

innerSpaceman · 01-03-2008, 01:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Kevy Baby

Kudos to Frodo Potter for his excellent soap dropping skills; a talent I understand he studied in depth with iSm.

Yes, and practice made for perfection. But wait till you hear him go on and on about the depth!

01-03-2008, 12:10 PM	#1
Not Afraid HI! Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 17,108	It's hard to be objective. Good friend shooting, good friend starting, good friend composting, my newly re-done bathroom (and even my photography is featured).........But here goes anyways. The uncomfortable moment is waiting for the soap to come out of the bottle. It just takes a bit too long. I agree that you don't know what Jen is "looking at" in the end shot. ("Man, I need to shave my pubes" comes to mind. ). I love the pacing of the music, it works perfectly. I think that it could be a bit "prettier" to fit the product. I love the concept of the reflection shot!!!! Love Jen's expression of disgust and I love the soap dropping. So, there's my very un-objective $.02.
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